Screaming Deceiving and Bleeding for You

Category: Writers Block

Post 1 by HauntedReverie (doing the bad mango) on Sunday, 22-Jan-2006 4:09:28

I fall with the anger, the rage, the passion, the fury.
And I scream unheard insults until my throat is bleeding raw.
And your voice, though soft and gentle, when whispering those words to her puts the dagger in my hand.
And who dare I bless with it?
You, her, myself?
Ah, the thirst for blood is great now and the lust for battle has risen its crimson head.
And I want to feel flesh, feel fire and all that havoc reeked by sweet vengeful chaos.
You stupid childish prick, did you think I’d wait in the shadows until you decided you needed my touch?
My God, you deserve this then!
With sweet lilting words I draw you nearer.
But this war, this game in all its glory is consuming the very essence I cherish.
Ahh, there is purity in battle, revenge in blood, and love in hate.
For that’s what everyone wants isn’t it?
The flash of silver, the face of death, the thrill of the blade piercing flesh inspires me.
And all those meaningless words back and forth are ashes of the ember now.
Feast your eyes on my condescension and disdain stupid shallow one,
For I stand atop your grave in victory.
And the screams come again, loud, glorious, joyously, “I hope you burn in hell!”

Post 2 by Emerald-Hourglass (Account disabled) on Sunday, 22-Jan-2006 14:00:02

wow that's deep but your good. What made you write it, like what is it about?

Post 3 by HauntedReverie (doing the bad mango) on Sunday, 22-Jan-2006 14:27:37

I'll tell you in private QN, but names won't be given ha. but I'm glad you liked it thanks

Post 4 by poet (The premium poet) on Sunday, 22-Jan-2006 19:53:37

I'm also curious.

Post 5 by Goblin (I have proven to myself and the world that I need mental help) on Monday, 23-Jan-2006 9:34:13

Such hate hmm the enemy has won an outright victory.

Post 6 by HauntedReverie (doing the bad mango) on Monday, 23-Jan-2006 19:17:40

see me privatly poet and I um, may tell ya lol. The enemy? Goblin, are you refering to the speaker as the enemy? Or that the speaker's hate is their downfall?

Post 7 by HauntedReverie (doing the bad mango) on Monday, 23-Jan-2006 19:19:49

see me privatly poet and I um, may tell ya lol. The enemy? Goblin, are you refering to the speaker as the enemy? Or that the speaker's hate is their downfall?